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Müssen - Portrait of a Young Man as The Artist — LiveJournal
I wanted four tiers more than she gave. Her gi, trailing out the door
and into her vehicle, was priceless. Ragged and fresh, it smelled of winter and lunches on the porch with her grandfather.

I do not regard her well. Dulcet though her tones be - Ich musse -
I cannot respond to an over-friendly hand.

Orange casts about, tangles of blue and matted fur, in his wisdom I seek to overcome.
He shouldn't be.
Ich musse.
It is these standards that force us apart, like time and the two headed best.

One moment, fragmented upon a brown frothing waterfall, lasts until yesterday; and it seeks to repeat its own history. It will succeed even when push it into my future. The two-beast, never to reconcile its dichotomy, will control me.
Ich musse.

The dedication to forthright action. Ich musse.
I can only slay this demon, if he is one, myself. Treading grimly on the mottled horizon, dripping fragments into loose colors, and straying from inaction to inaction - I tyrannize the future with my fist.

Current Mood: hungry hungry
Current Music: Further A/C squeaking

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phoenix_snake From: phoenix_snake Date: July 27th, 2004 11:46 am (UTC) (Link)

bite it

[so, I'm going to try to open dialogue about this in the same style in which it was posted]


the splatters of splinters
and dippings of (brain) juice

cover the screen

who is


is I


you are?

colors and feelings and scents and colors make up the story, like 'sunshine on a cloudy day'?

Hell no.

Like canvass on a painting.

Three tiers?

Three tears?

Never separate, it is and you are. Never demon, not to conquer, unless through it to and through yourself.

Iche Musse?
abmann From: abmann Date: July 27th, 2004 12:07 pm (UTC) (Link)

Re: bite it

It's going to be very hard to answer your question when I can't understand it.

Ich musse. I must, good gernab verb.
She in this case is a trainer that bugs the hell out of me.
abmann From: abmann Date: July 27th, 2004 12:11 pm (UTC) (Link)

Re: bite it

Is this a comment on your liking/disliking of what I'm doing O.o?
phoenix_snake From: phoenix_snake Date: July 27th, 2004 07:34 pm (UTC) (Link)

Re: bite it

i had a few questions about the piece, a few comments. I decided that it would be better to form a poem with the questions, in order to get you to see your work in a different way.

Its a collections of questions and comments inspired by the poem.

Do you want real-people dialogue?
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