The Piecemeal Man (abmann) wrote,
The Piecemeal Man
abmann

Sadō

Between fragrant petals
the subtext of Shin-mi
restrains/breaks a dry twig.
Her tea grows cold
beside unretained rice.
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can't decide if I like "restrains" or "breaks" better... :|
Tags: art, art-poetry
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